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Drowning in fields of melted green
Grasping at the newborn light of the sun
A shooting star soars and lands in between
My eyes.  It twinkles at me and we run

So we swim along to the beat of my heart
The lilies and diamonds don't even care
But the jigsaw puzzle crumbles apart
And the staircase is no longer there

The artichoke's heart turns inside out
The ocean is nothing but water and salt
Then the twinkle fades into betrayal and doubt
As my blood peels from the walls

The shooting star who once loved me
Has found a comet with which to run
Now I'm drowning in fields of melted green
Grasping at the dwindling light of the sun
©2008-2009 ~n00b3h
:iconn00b3h:

Author's Comments

...I need a new author tag.


Yeah, not much to say. I just started writing this in math class one day, and I ended up liking it. Whoo!

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:icondr-murdock-kawfi:
Very nice!

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MANGA CONTEST; [link]
You should join it ;3

じゃあね
:iconokamish:

Now I'm drowning in fields of melted green
Grasping at the dwindling light of the sun

My favorite line. C:
That's so weird. I was writing peotry today for fun. :0
This is beautiful!
:iconkaorudono7:
*i think im gonna cry*
lol i think that i was very beautiful.
good job D kun!
^ ^

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Is Currently Busy Practicing My Drawings and Creating a Manga Story.
:iconzeezeeshredder:
Sweet. Fairly random, kind of like a beatles song, but it still makes sense. :)

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"If the sun don't come, you get a tan from standing in the English-rain." - The Beatles, I am the Walrus
:iconmedli20:
Wow, I like it! :D It's so surreal and beautiful. ^^

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"I'd sail the sea until I croak, I fight and swear and drink and smoke, but I can't swim a single stroke," said Barnacle Bill the Sailor. [link]
:iconactressforlife15:
Oh my goodness. That is full of amazingness!!!!
:icontorrito:
0.0 what? you can draw, and sing, and act... AND NOW YOU CAN WRITE TOO??? geez, dylan. save a little talent for the rest of us. and, good job.

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I'm plumetting straight down in a roundabout spiral
Towards waking sleep with no chance of revival
If I don't catch myself you can't break my fall
I'll lose all that I have, which is nothing at all
:icontellmeyourproblems:
i feel it. you're amazing (i use that word too much).

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Do you hear that? That's the sound of my heart. I think it's crying.

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